Level 5 — Advanced · Structural & Academic Writing
Task 44: Building a Paragraph's Argument
Write a paragraph that states a claim, supports it with real evidence rather than a single anecdote, and closes with a qualification — then compress the whole thing to one sentence without losing the hedge, scope, or qualification, exactly the skill Lesson 44 taught for reading.
Learning Objectives
By the end of this task, you should be able to:
- Build a paragraph with a clear claim, systematic evidence (not a single illustration), and a closing qualification
- Compress the paragraph into one sentence while preserving its modality, scope, and qualification
- Distinguish, in your own writing, an illustrative example from genuine evidence
Introduction
Lesson 44 taught you to read a paragraph as an argument — claim, evidence, qualification — not a list of separately meaningful sentences. Building one yourself means making the same three moves deliberately, in order, and then proving you can compress the whole argument into one sentence without quietly dropping the qualification that made it honest.
Claim, Evidence, Qualification — for Writing
Core Concept
A paragraph's claim states what you're arguing. Its evidence supports that claim with something broader than a single story — a study, a pattern across several cases, a measured result — not just one illustrative anecdote. Its qualification admits a limit on the claim, usually with however or although, so the paragraph doesn't claim more than its evidence actually earns.
Example
Claim: Automated invoicing can shorten payment cycles. Evidence: A review of twelve mid-sized firms found average payment times fell by nearly a week after adoption. Qualification: However, firms that also renegotiated payment terms during the same period saw similar gains, so automation alone cannot be credited with the full effect.
Your Turn
Your Turn
Write one paragraph (100-150 words) about a workplace or operational topic. State a claim, support it with evidence broader than a single anecdote (a study, a pattern, a measured result — not just "one company noticed..."), and close with a qualification that limits how much credit the claim can take. Then, underneath the paragraph, compress it into one sentence that keeps the claim's modality (may/appears to), its scope, and its qualification intact.
Vocabulary in Context
illustrationnounformal
a single concrete example used to make an idea vivid, weaker on its own than systematic evidence (দৃষ্টান্ত)
Often with a vivid illustration, illustration of, serve as an illustration
“The delayed shipment serves as an illustration of poor coordination.”
attribute tophrasal verbformal
to credit something as the cause of an outcome, often limited by a hedge like 'partly' (আরোপ করা)
Often with attribute to, be attributed to, partly attribute to
“The improvement was partly attributed to the new roster.”
Model Answer
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Predictive maintenance software can reduce unplanned equipment downtime. An analysis of eighteen manufacturing plants found that facilities using such software experienced roughly 20% fewer unplanned stoppages over two years than those relying on scheduled maintenance alone. However, the plants that adopted the software had also recently retrained their maintenance staff, so the reduction in downtime cannot be attributed to the software alone. One-sentence compression: Predictive maintenance software may reduce unplanned downtime, though an eighteen-plant study cannot separate its effect from concurrent staff retraining. The compression keeps the hedge ("may"), the evidence's scope (eighteen plants, two years), and the qualification (staff retraining) all intact.
Self-Check
Self-Check
- Does your evidence sentence describe something broader than a single anecdote?
- Does your qualification genuinely limit the claim, rather than just restating it?
- Does your one-sentence compression keep the claim's hedge word, rather than stating it as flat fact?
- Does the compression keep the qualification, rather than dropping it to save words?
Next: Writing 45 — Writing in Academic Chunks: using causal-family verbs and formal lexical bundles correctly, as single units of meaning, instead of building academic sentences word by word.